My palms bleed from this rose you gave me
I couldn’t feel the pain for I am mesmerized by its beauty
I held it tight, not wanting to let go
You’ll soon see this blood stains and soon you will save me
But decades passed,
Hundred times you walked by,
Million times, I’ve cried for you.
But not once did you stayed and look through
This blood is wasted, dried up beneath my feet
These thorns stayed hidden within my grip
Every second of the clock, they sting, they hurt
My eyes are restless, but tears are translucent
I cried and cried but not a single sympathy
You gave me a rose, asked me to appreciate it
But now it burns from this glare I’m giving
From red to grey… ashes are all that is left
They burned me as well, I never did let go
Nothing is left of me
Because of this rose you’ve given me















Comments
"these blood is wasted"
perhaps that should be "this blood is wasted?"
but you have a very vivid imagery, and it brings a lot of passion to this piece. good job.
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Automatons gather all the pieces so the world may be increased
In simulation jubilation for the builders of the body of the beast
thanks
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Who are you to tell me who I am?!
thanks kuya! wahahaha.
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Who are you to tell me who I am?!
thanks for the critique and comment.
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Who are you to tell me who I am?!
at tsaka ang bait pa at ang ganda grabe! kung lalake ka lng siguro nililigawan na kita! umm...did i say that? was it correct? wait lemme rephrase....kung lalake lang ako...siguro nililigawan na kita kahit layo ng gap natin
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I SHALL REGAIN MY CHOCO BAR!! ROAR!! \(ToT)/
woi! ATE mo ko!! you can't do that!! hehehehe, joking
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Who are you to tell me who I am?!
same as always lovely piece...
love the whole metaphor..
hay... love... crazy thing callled love...
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